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JCorrachComics said:
Transcript:
Dr. Smithe: It's just so sudden, who could blame you for getting a head start? I mean really, after all of this, how could his heart just give up?
Dr. Madison: Maybe there's only so many times it can pull itself back together again.
Dr. Smithe: Maybe...
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The intro is done, hope the voiceovers/timeline of events haven't been too difficult to follow!
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Love the flow of these panels! This has been such a smooth read it makes my eyes very happy.
March 6, 2020
So glad to hear it! This is the first time I'm doing a page-by-page comic like this, so knowing what I get right is awesome
And if something does come out illegible or too confusing, please do let me know so I can fix it for next time!
March 6, 2020
I love the flow of the panels so far and the way you incorporated the narration into them.
I'm super intrigued by the mystery as well.
March 8, 2020
ACK sorry I missed this, I though I'd already replied- thank you!
Also I've been really enjoying Miasma Theory as well, I love how you do your lineart, how dark and gritty the apocalypse feels and the way it pulls my eyes around with the flow of motion, I'm not gonna lie I feel a bit starstruck you've decided to read my stuff <:>
March 26, 2020
THe layout and narration are done VERY well! Given the large size of the body, its possible that the heart just wore out after having to pump so much blood through so much surface area for 37 years.
May 1, 2020
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