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JCorrachComics said:
Transcript:
Dr. Stern: But I do think you know something. So, did you want to tell me what that is now, or will we let the autopsy do all the talking?
Dr. Madison: "Know something-" why the hell would I withhold information?? To deliberately keep this a mystery helps nobody, not US, not the RESEARCH, and certainly not HIM. Do you really think I'd let his suffering be for nothing!?
Dr. Stern: You must understand by skepticism. How can someone with our credentials have NOTHING to guess on, especially the one that found the body?
Dr. Madison: I told you. All I know. Over the phone. Clearly, nothing I say will convince you of my innocence. I am taking my break, now.
Dr. Stern: ...Right then.
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Temper temper!
I've been trying to keep away from "talking head" pages, but this is an important conversation, and this point is the most wordy things will need to be, so having one page like it might not be too bad in the long run
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Interesting. And I think you've spaced the wordings well, breaking the dialogue into small balloons. It read smoothly for me.
May 29, 2020
Ayy, I'm glad to hear it! I always feel myself going cross-eyed when there's big paragraphs of text, so making things readable is one of my top priorities always
May 29, 2020
JUST DISSECT HIM!
Also: i love these camera angles!
May 29, 2020
Thank! the panel with their arms gave me a lot of trouble, do you ever find that when you're looking for a specific angle for a reference picture that you can't find anything like it? @_@
May 29, 2020
Quite frequently! ANgles can be tricky
May 29, 2020
I like how you mix up the panel styles, like the black background in the second panel.
May 29, 2020
Thank you, I'm trying to keep things varied! Heavy black shadows are some of my favourite things to play with
May 29, 2020
watch out, man! You're going to spill the coffee!
... I just noticed that dr. Stern has a long, horizontal scar across his forehead(?!)
May 29, 2020
That he does! I believe it's up to the viewer to decide whose brain it is he's gazing at here
May 29, 2020
Stern's so expressive I love it :D
June 3, 2020
Facial hair is so fun to fiddle with when characters emote, I love drawing it!
June 3, 2020
There's definitely a mood here... Someone knows something!!!
March 3, 2023
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