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JCorrachComics said:
Dr. Smithe: ...hm. Mhm... Nothing. ...Hah, just checking. You know, I wasn't sold on this project at first. Did I ever tell you? I mean, curing one of our country's leading causes of death? It might put me out of a job, hahah! It's amazing how quickly I got used to a talking patient; I picked the dead specifically to avoid that bedside manner stuff. You really were special, Trev. I never thought I'd say this, but... I miss your screams.
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That sure is a normal thing to say :T
Also fun fact: this page got drafted up and drawn within the week; while I did change the overall pacing of the whole comic before I started posting it, this page wasn't in my original script at all! This doesn't mean much beyond, when this is finished, I wonder if it will still feel necessary? For now I'm glad I decided to slot it in though, it feels warranted with how little info will get put into actual words throughout the entirety of the comic
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Oh man, this popped up right as I was about to go to bed. Nice surprise.
From my perspective as somebody totally in the dark, it'd definitely working as a page that gives out small but important pieces of info, like the stuff about curing diseases, as well as giving a little context on the doctor's personal relationship with Trevor. It's good!
April 17, 2020
I'm glad! I've never been a fan of info-dumps in anything I read, so trying to figure out how to keep context to light hints, but not completely gone, has been a bit difficult lmao
April 17, 2020
You're hitting that balance well! I'm in suspense.
April 17, 2020
Yeah, seconding the first comment! It's good to have a bit more info about what's going on, and this definitely doesn't feel like an infodump- just a little extra context.
Also I only just now got caught up, but this comic is really good so far and I'm super interested in seeing where it goes.
April 17, 2020
That really means a lot to me, thank you so much! I hope this will keep being a fun ride, albeit a short one <:>
April 17, 2020
I miss your screams? Why you had to take a weird route, science guy? Why? Is the cause of death a car crash? Trevor kind of gives me the Graham vibes...
April 17, 2020
I can tell you it wasn't a car crash, trevor has survived worse
also omg graham!! I'd almost forgotten about that guy, I love his big ol' face
April 17, 2020
I'll echo other comments, this is good character development, makes us know more about his personality, and is an enjoyable monologue.
And the last line is interest grabbing.
April 19, 2020
So glad to hear that the effort was worth it, by the sounds of things!
April 20, 2020
....................what?
May 1, 2020
sick!
February 6, 2021
"I miss your screams." Period.
*shiver*
Th-this is the kind of gore I meant.
August 6, 2021
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